The Dance Of Life |
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The Dance Of Life |
 Apr 5 2008, 11:28 AM
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 Dominologist  Religion:Pending Review Posts: 5,986 Gender: 
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 The Dance of Life Some may think and others speak, Some are strong and others weak. Those who speak another's thoughts Are sometimes met with reasons caught. Suddenly caught in webs of chance, Hurried reasons expose the dance. The dance of life the creator gave us, Hoping our beliefs would save us. The wind takes credit for blowing in dust, For the simple reason that he must. The same wind blows over sea and land Causes the tides and moves the sand. "See what I did", The wind seems to say, Unmoved by the sun that starts the day. The wind and the sun, with help from a star, Move with the gravity from afar. The wind claims to have created the air
And the earth moves around regardless of care. This post has been edited by Ceshune: Apr 15 2008, 11:32 AM |
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Apr 5 2008, 02:41 PM
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 Dominion Liege  Religion:Muslim From: Islamfactor Posts: 16,993 Gender: 
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Apr 6 2008, 02:42 AM
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 Bitten Member Religion:Pagan From: South Africa Posts: 796 Gender:
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Oh, this is great!!! your rhyme andfow is fantastic Ceshune, I really enjoyed this!!!
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Apr 12 2008, 05:23 PM
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 Where Do We Go Now?  Religion:Muslim From: London, United Kingdom Posts: 829 Gender:
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Nice poem but man was made weak, other than that it's great.
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Apr 12 2008, 07:39 PM
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 G.d-loving scientist Religion:Noachide From: Iowa, USA Posts: 418 Gender:
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QUOTE (HoЯus™ @ Apr 12 2008, 06:23 PM)  ...man was made weak... As compared to what? |
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Apr 12 2008, 07:47 PM
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Where Do We Go Now? Religion:Muslim From: London, United Kingdom Posts: 829 Gender:
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Compared to who God.
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Lo-Fi Version | Time is now: 9th February 2010 - 06:31 AM |
